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Discuss both views NatureSociety Essay #546
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Many people believe that zoos are cruel. Others think they are helpful in protecting rare animals.

Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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261 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Introduce the debate about zoos (cruel vs. helpful for conservation). State the author's opinion supporting the helpful view.

In the realm of animal conservation, there exists a dichotomy of opinions: some perceive zoos as inhumane, while others argue they are instrumental in preserving endangered species. I align myself with the latter viewpoint, advocating for the constructive role zoos play in animal protection.

Body 1 · View 1

Discuss arguments against zoos: ethical reasons, loss of natural instincts/stress (elephants), treating animals as commodities (polar bears example).

Those who denounce zoos often do so on ethical grounds. They contend that confining animals to artificial habitats deprives them of their natural instincts and behaviors, leading to psychological distress. For instance, elephants in the wild cover vast distances daily, a freedom of movement that is severely curtailed in zoos. Additionally, critics argue that zoos commodify animals, reducing them to mere exhibits for public entertainment. The spectacle of a polar bear performing tricks, they argue, trivializes the majesty and dignity of these magnificent creatures.

Body 2 · View 2

Discuss arguments for responsible zoos: crucial for conservation, safe haven for endangered species (black rhino breeding example), educational centers (promoting conservation, tiger encounter example).

However, despite these valid concerns, I maintain that zoos, when managed responsibly, serve a vital function in animal conservation. Zoos provide a sanctuary for species on the brink of extinction, offering them protection from poaching and habitat destruction. The successful breeding of the critically endangered black rhinoceros in zoos, for example, has been instrumental in preventing its complete disappearance. Furthermore, zoos serve as educational platforms, fostering an appreciation for wildlife and instilling in visitors the urgency of conservation efforts. A child's encounter with a majestic tiger, for instance, can inspire a lifelong commitment to environmental stewardship.

Conclusion

Summarize arguments against zoos (distress, commodities) but reiterate that the benefits (conservation, education) are more significant.

In conclusion, while the arguments against zoos, such as the potential for animal distress and commodification, are not without merit, I believe the benefits of zoos in preserving endangered species and promoting environmental education outweigh these concerns.

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