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Discuss both views Media Essay #517
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Some people think that advertising on TV is useless and others disagree.

Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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250 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase topic (some think TV ads useless, others disagree). State own opinion (believe TV ads are effective).

In the realm of marketing, some individuals perceive television advertising as futile, while others advocate its efficacy. I align myself with the latter group, believing in the power of television commercials.

Body 1 · View 1

Discuss view that TV ads are useless: Rise of digital media reducing TV audience (counter: TV still reaches older people); Ads are annoying and interruptive, causing negative reactions.

Those who dismiss television advertising as ineffective often cite the advent of digital media as their primary rationale. They argue that in an era where online platforms are burgeoning, television has lost its sheen, and with it, its audience. This argument, however, overlooks the fact that television still holds sway over a significant demographic, particularly among the older generation who are less inclined towards digital media. Another contention is that television commercials are intrusive, disrupting the viewer's experience. This intrusion, they argue, engenders resentment towards the advertised product, thereby defeating the purpose of the advertisement.

Body 2 · View 2

Discuss view that TV ads are effective (own opinion): Unmatched visual/audio stimulation makes them memorable (e.g., Coca-Cola Christmas ads); Reach a wide and varied audience beyond digital barriers (e.g., local business reaching remote areas).

Despite these arguments, I maintain that television advertising retains its relevance and potency. Firstly, the visual and auditory stimulation offered by television commercials is unparalleled, making them more memorable. For instance, the iconic Coca-Cola Christmas commercials have become a cultural phenomenon, demonstrating the enduring impact of television advertising. Secondly, television commercials have the ability to reach a broad and diverse audience, transcending geographical and digital divides. A local business, for example, can reach potential customers in remote areas where internet access is limited, through television advertising.

Conclusion

Summarize opposing arguments (useless vs. effective). Restate opinion (TV ads are a strong marketing tool).

In conclusion, while there are arguments suggesting the obsolescence of television advertising due to digital media proliferation and its intrusive nature, I believe its strengths, namely its sensory appeal and extensive reach, make it a formidable marketing tool.

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