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Positive or negative TravelTransportMoney Essay #479
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Air travel has become cheaper in recent times.

Is this positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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258 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Introduce the topic of cheaper air travel. Acknowledge it has advantages but state the opinion that disadvantages are more significant.

The advent of affordable air travel has revolutionized the way people traverse the globe. While this development brings with it a myriad of benefits, it is my contention that the drawbacks are more substantial.

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Discuss positive aspects: increased global accessibility promoting cultural exchange. Boosted tourism industry, strengthening economies (developing countries), creating jobs, and improving living conditions.

The most conspicuous advantage of inexpensive air travel is its democratization of global mobility. This means that the world has become more accessible to individuals from various socio-economic backgrounds, thereby fostering cultural exchange and understanding on an unprecedented scale. Furthermore, the affordability of air travel has stimulated the growth of the tourism industry. As a result, many economies, particularly those of developing countries, have been bolstered by the influx of tourists, leading to job creation and improved living standards.

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Discuss negative aspects: significant rise in carbon emissions worsening global warming (with example). Increased over-tourism causing environmental damage and decreased quality of life for locals (with examples).

However, the negative implications of this trend cannot be overlooked. The surge in air travel has led to a significant increase in carbon emissions, contributing to the exacerbation of global warming. To illustrate, a single transatlantic flight can produce up to 1.6 tonnes of CO2 per passenger, which is equivalent to the average yearly emissions of one person in India. Additionally, the proliferation of tourists in certain areas has given rise to over-tourism, resulting in environmental degradation and a decline in the quality of life for local residents. For instance, cities like Venice and Barcelona have been grappling with the negative impacts of mass tourism, such as overcrowding and inflated living costs.

Conclusion

Summarize the main points (accessibility/economy vs. environmental damage/over-tourism). Restate the opinion that the development is more harmful.

In conclusion, while the affordability of air travel has democratized global mobility and stimulated economic growth, the environmental repercussions and the issues associated with over-tourism make this development more detrimental than beneficial.

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