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Causes, effects and solutions NatureWorld Essay #354
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing.

Why is this? What can be done?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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229 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Acknowledge the problem of decreasing drinkable water. State the essay will discuss causes and solutions.

The global availability of potable water is witnessing a significant decline. This essay will explore the reasons behind this alarming trend and propose potential solutions.

Body 1 · View 1

Discuss the causes of the decrease. Point 1: Rapid growth of industries (use and pollution). Point 2: Climate change (changing rain patterns, droughts; example: Sub-Saharan Africa).

One of the primary reasons for the dwindling supply of drinkable water is the escalating rate of industrialization. As industries proliferate, they consume vast quantities of water, often contaminating it in the process, thereby reducing the amount of water safe for human consumption. Another contributing factor is climate change, which exacerbates water scarcity by altering precipitation patterns and causing more frequent and severe droughts. For instance, regions like Sub-Saharan Africa are experiencing increased incidences of drought, leading to acute water shortages and affecting millions of people.

Body 2 · View 2

Discuss the solutions. Point 1: Enforce stricter rules on industrial water use and pollution (implementing laws). Point 2: Invest in water cleaning and reuse technology (example: Singapore's NEWater system).

Transitioning to the solutions, a key strategy to combat this issue is implementing stricter regulations on industrial water usage and pollution. By enforcing laws that limit water consumption and mandate proper waste disposal, governments can ensure industries do not deplete or contaminate water resources. Another solution lies in investing in technology that can efficiently purify and recycle water. For example, Singapore's NEWater treatment system successfully purifies treated used water into high-grade reclaimed water, providing a sustainable source of potable water.

Conclusion

Summarize main causes (industries, climate change). Summarize main solutions (strict rules, technology). Restate that these actions can address the problem.

In summary, industrialization and climate change are major culprits behind the decreasing availability of drinkable water. However, through stringent regulations on industries and investments in water purification and recycling technologies, it is possible to address this pressing issue.

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