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Discuss both views MediaCultureArt Essay #561
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negative impact on local culture.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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343 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase question about foreign films' impact (beneficial vs. negative). State author's opinion favouring the enriching effect.

In the realm of cinematic culture, some individuals advocate for the exhibition of foreign films, asserting their educational and entertainment value, while others express concern over the potential erosion of local culture. Personally, I am inclined towards the former perspective, acknowledging the enriching influence of international cinema.

Body 1 · View 1

Topic sentence for 'negative impact'. Fear of culture dilution (overshadowing local stories, e.g., Nollywood). Argument for cultural uniformity leading to loss of local customs (e.g., Western films in India).

Those who resist the influx of foreign films often do so out of a fear of cultural dilution. They argue that the prevalence of international cinema could overshadow local film industries, thereby marginalizing native storytelling. For instance, in countries like Nigeria, where the local film industry, Nollywood, is a significant cultural cornerstone, the dominance of foreign films might stifle local creativity and originality. Additionally, they contend that foreign films, with their distinct cultural nuances, could inadvertently promote cultural homogenization, leading to the loss of unique local customs and traditions. This is particularly evident in countries with rich cultural heritage like India, where the influence of Western films has been linked to the gradual erosion of traditional values.

Body 2 · View 2

Topic sentence for 'advantages outweigh negatives' (author's view). Advantage 1: Educational resource (glimpse into cultures, history, e.g., Holocaust films). Advantage 2: Inspiration for local film industries (new techniques/stories, e.g., Hollywood impact on Bollywood).

However, I believe that the benefits of showcasing foreign films far outweigh the potential drawbacks. Firstly, foreign films serve as an invaluable educational tool, providing audiences with a window into different cultures, histories, and societal structures. For example, films like 'Schindler's List' or 'The Pianist' offer profound insights into the horrors of the Holocaust, fostering empathy and understanding among viewers. Secondly, foreign films can stimulate local film industries by introducing new cinematic techniques and narratives, thereby enriching the quality of local cinema. The influence of Hollywood's advanced filmmaking techniques on Bollywood, for instance, has led to significant improvements in the quality of Indian cinema, demonstrating the positive impact of foreign films.

Conclusion

Summarize views (protecting local culture vs. educational/industry growth benefits). Reiterate belief in essential nature of foreign films. Suggest finding a balance (enjoy international while supporting local).

In conclusion, while there are valid arguments to limit the exposure to foreign films in order to preserve local culture, I believe that the educational value and the potential for cinematic growth that these films offer make their inclusion in local cinemas indispensable. The key lies in striking a balance, ensuring that while we appreciate global cinema, we also continue to celebrate and nurture our own cinematic traditions.

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