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Discuss both views TransportNatureGovernment Essay #117
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Some people believe that car-free days are effective ways to reduce air pollution. However, others argue that there are other ways that are more effective.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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293 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Introduce the debate about car-free days versus other methods for reducing air pollution and state the author's agreement with the latter.

In the discourse on air pollution mitigation, there are those who advocate for car-free days as a viable solution, while others posit that alternative methods yield greater efficacy. I am inclined to align with the latter perspective.

Body 1 · View 1

Discuss the arguments for car-free days: immediate air quality improvement (especially in cities) and promotion of alternative transport/healthier habits with potential for long-term change.

Those championing car-free days as a pollution reduction strategy do so with some compelling arguments. Firstly, they argue that the immediate reduction in exhaust fumes on car-free days leads to a noticeable improvement in air quality. This is particularly evident in densely populated urban areas where traffic congestion is a daily occurrence. Secondly, they contend that car-free days encourage the use of public transportation, cycling, or walking, which, beyond reducing pollution, also promotes healthier lifestyles. This shift in transportation habits, they believe, could potentially extend beyond these designated days, thereby having a more long-term impact on pollution levels.

Body 2 · View 2

Present arguments for other methods being more effective (supporting author's opinion): encouraging electric cars (lasting solution without exhaust) and enforcing stricter industrial emission standards (major source, targets main cause).

However, despite the aforementioned merits, I find the arguments for alternative methods more persuasive. One such argument is the promotion of electric vehicles, which, unlike car-free days, offer a permanent solution to vehicular pollution. The adoption of electric vehicles, though initially costly, can lead to significant reductions in air pollution over time, as they emit no exhaust fumes. Another compelling argument is the implementation of stringent industrial regulations. Industries are major contributors to air pollution, and by enforcing stricter emission standards, we could achieve a more substantial and consistent reduction in air pollution. This approach directly targets the root cause of the problem, rather than its symptoms, like traffic emissions.

Conclusion

Summarize the contrasting views (car-free days as short-term vs. others as long-term solutions) and reiterate the preference for strategies like electric cars and industry rules that address the source of pollution.

In conclusion, while car-free days present a temporary respite from air pollution, the long-term solutions offered by the promotion of electric vehicles and stricter industrial regulations make the latter view more compelling. These strategies address the issue at its core, promising a more sustainable reduction in air pollution.

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