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Positive or negative WorldNatureMoney Essay #480
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world.

To what extent is this a positive or negative trend?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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262 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase topic (countries importing large amounts of food). State that there are advantages but the disadvantages are argued to be more impactful.

The globalized era has witnessed an increasing trend of countries importing substantial quantities of food from international markets. While this practice brings certain benefits, it is argued that the drawbacks are more significant.

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Discuss advantages: Increased variety and availability (e.g., tropical fruits in colder regions). Stable prices and consistent supply (prevents shortages/price hikes during local issues like droughts).

On the positive side, the importation of food allows nations to enjoy a diverse range of products that might not be locally available. For instance, tropical fruits like mangoes and pineapples, which are not native to colder regions, can be enjoyed by consumers in these areas due to importation. Additionally, importing food can help stabilize prices and ensure a steady supply of goods. In times of local agricultural crises, such as droughts or floods, imported food can prevent skyrocketing prices and food shortages, thereby safeguarding the welfare of consumers.

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Discuss disadvantages (argued to be greater): Harms local farming industry (cheaper imports undercut local products, causes unemployment). Significant environmental cost (transport emissions contribute to global warming, e.g., shipping apples long distances).

However, the negative implications of this trend seem to outweigh the aforementioned advantages. Primarily, the reliance on imported food can undermine the local agricultural sector. This is because cheaper imported goods can outcompete local products, leading to a decline in local farming and, consequently, rural unemployment. Furthermore, the environmental impact of transporting food across long distances is considerable. The carbon emissions from ships, planes, and trucks contribute significantly to global warming. For example, the transportation of apples from New Zealand to Europe generates more carbon dioxide per kilogram than local production.

Conclusion

Summarize main points (variety/stability vs. local farming/environment). Restate the opinion that the negative effects are more harmful.

In conclusion, while the importation of food can enhance diversity and ensure price stability, the detrimental effects on local agriculture and the environment render this trend more negative. The undermining of local farming and the environmental toll of transportation are compelling reasons to reconsider the extent of food importation.

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