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Positive or negative CrimeMediaGovernment Essay #510
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

In some countries, criminal trials are shown on television for the public.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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237 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase topic (criminal court cases on TV). State there are benefits. State opinion: negatives greatly outweigh positives.

In certain jurisdictions, the legal proceedings of criminal trials are broadcasted on television for public consumption. While this practice has its merits, it is my contention that the drawbacks significantly overshadow the benefits.

Body 1 · View 1

Topic: Benefits. Promote openness (justice seen, public confidence). Educational (see how system works, less mysterious).

One of the key advantages of televising criminal trials is the promotion of transparency in the legal system. By allowing the public to witness the proceedings, it ensures that justice is not only done, but seen to be done, thereby bolstering public trust in the judiciary. Furthermore, it serves an educational purpose, providing the populace with a firsthand insight into the workings of the court system. This exposure can demystify the legal process, making it more accessible and understandable to the average citizen.

Body 2 · View 2

Topic: Downsides. Main issue: interfere with fair trial (scrutiny/bias sway jury, undermine fairness). Media drama ('trial by media', public early judgments).

However, the negative implications of this practice are far more profound. Primarily, the media coverage can potentially infringe upon the defendant's right to a fair trial. The incessant scrutiny and potential for public bias could unduly influence the jury's decision, thereby compromising the integrity of the trial. Additionally, the sensationalism often associated with televised trials can lead to a 'trial by media' phenomenon. This can result in the public forming premature judgments based on media portrayals, rather than waiting for the due process of law to take its course.

Conclusion

Summarize: Acknowledge benefits (openness, education). Reiterate opinion: potential for unfair trial/media risk are more important (negatives outweigh).

In conclusion, while the transparency and educational benefits of broadcasting criminal trials are noteworthy, the potential infringement on a fair trial and the risk of media sensationalism make the disadvantages more significant.

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