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Discuss both views CultureSociety Essay #1
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Many people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that it has only minor influence.

Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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278 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase the topic presenting the two opposing views (birthplace primary factor vs. minor effect). State the author's lean towards the latter view (minor effect).

In the realm of cultural identity, some individuals posit that one's country of origin is the primary determinant, while others argue that its influence is marginal. I am inclined to support the latter perspective.

Body 1 · View 1

Present the view that culture is tied to birthplace. Argue that cultural norms, traditions, and values are deeply rooted in history (e.g., Japanese tea ceremonies). Mention that language shapes worldview (Sapir-Whorf hypothesis).

Those who attribute cultural identity to geographical origin have their reasons. Primarily, they argue that cultural norms, traditions, and values are deeply ingrained in a country's history and are passed down through generations. For instance, Japanese tea ceremonies, a product of centuries of tradition, significantly shape the cultural identity of individuals born and raised in Japan. Additionally, they contend that the language spoken in one's country of origin plays a pivotal role in shaping their worldview. As the Sapir-Whorf hypothesis suggests, language can influence our perception of reality, thus contributing to our cultural identity.

Body 2 · View 2

Present the view that birthplace has a limited effect. Argue that globalization blurs lines and mixes cultures (e.g., Indian adopting Western habits). State that personal experiences and interactions greatly shape identity (e.g., moving country at a young age). Justify why the author agrees with this view.

Nevertheless, I align myself with those who believe that the country of origin has a limited influence on one's cultural identity. Firstly, the advent of globalization has blurred geographical boundaries, leading to a fusion of cultures. An individual in India, for example, may adopt Western cultural practices due to the influence of global media, thereby diluting the impact of their country of origin on their cultural identity. Secondly, personal experiences and interactions play a significant role in shaping one's cultural identity. A person who migrates at a young age will likely identify more with the culture of their adopted country due to their formative experiences there.

Conclusion

Summarize the discussion of both views. Reiterate the author's belief that birthplace has relatively small influence, highlighting the impact of globalization and personal experiences.

In conclusion, while there are compelling arguments to suggest that a person's country of origin defines their culture, I maintain that its influence is relatively minor. The pervasive impact of globalization and the profound influence of personal experiences present stronger arguments for this perspective.

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