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Causes, effects and solutions ArtSociety Essay #635
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is?

What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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260 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Acknowledge the shift from arts to STEM/business. State essay will look at causes and solutions.

It is true that while art remains a pillar of human culture, modern society increasingly prioritizes technical and commercial disciplines. This essay will discuss the reasons for this shift and suggest ways to rekindle public interest in the arts.

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Causes: 1. Economic pressure/focus on STEM for job security. 2. Perception of art as elitist or inaccessible.

A major cause of this situation is the prevailing economic climate and the emphasis on STEM careers. In a highly competitive job market, students and parents believe that science, technology, and business offer greater financial security and career stability, leading to the marginalization of arts in education. Another factor that this problem can be attributed to is the perception that art is elitist or inaccessible. Many modern art forms can feel disconnected from the lives of average people, who may find traditional galleries intimidating or the subject matter too abstract to enjoy.

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Solutions: 1. Increased funding for public art and workshops. 2. STEAM education (integrating arts with science).

However, there are various solutions available to address this problem. One would be for governments to increase funding for public art installations and community workshops. By bringing art into public spaces like parks and subways, authorities can make it a part of daily life rather than something confined to expensive museums. Another way to combat this issue is by integrating the arts into the core school curriculum through a 'STEAM' approach. By showing the connection between creativity and scientific innovation, schools can help students see art as a valuable and practical skill.

Conclusion

Summarize causes (finances and elitism) and solutions (public access and education).

In conclusion, economic pressure and a sense of elitism are the primary causes of the declining interest in art. Not until art becomes more accessible and integrated into education will it regain its rightful place in society.

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