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Agree or disagree TravelTransportNature Essay #585
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Long distance flight consumes the amount of fuel that a car uses for many years and pollutes the air. Some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourists travel, rather than limit the use of cars.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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268 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Introduce the idea of targeting non-essential flights over car usage for environmental reasons. State clear disagreement.

The environmental impact of aviation is undeniably severe, often leading to suggestions that leisure air travel should be curtailed instead of restricting automobile usage. I disagree with the view that non-essential flights should be targeted as the primary solution to air pollution.

Body 1

Compare the impact of daily car usage versus occasional air travel. Argue that cars are a more pervasive and constant source of pollution.

Firstly, while a single flight has a massive carbon footprint, the cumulative impact of global car usage is significantly more damaging to the environment. Millions of vehicles are driven daily for commuting and errands, contributing to a constant and pervasive level of urban pollution and greenhouse gas emissions. Discouraging tourism flights, which most people take only once or twice a year, would address only a small fraction of the total environmental problem. Therefore, focusing on car emissions, which affect air quality on a daily basis in every city, remains a more logical and effective priority for environmental policy.

Body 2

Discuss the economic consequences of discouraging tourism. Explain how many nations depend on air travel and suggest technological innovation as a better alternative.

Secondly, discouraging non-essential air travel would have a devastating impact on the global economy, particularly for developing nations. Many countries rely heavily on international tourism as their primary source of income and employment. If tourist flights were severely discouraged, it would lead to widespread job losses in the hospitality, transport, and service sectors worldwide. Instead of banning or discouraging travel, governments should focus on incentivizing the aviation industry to develop sustainable fuels and more efficient technology. This approach would protect the environment without destroying the livelihoods of millions who depend on the tourism industry.

Conclusion

Restate disagreement. Summarize that car emissions are a more urgent daily issue and air travel restrictions would damage global livelihoods.

In conclusion, I disagree that discouraging non-essential flights should take precedence over limiting car use. This is because car emissions are a more constant threat, and targeting tourism would cause significant global economic harm.

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