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Agree or disagree Tech Essay #534
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Earlier developments in technology brought more benefits to change the lives of ordinary people than recent ones do now.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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262 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Acknowledge the common view that past tech brought more benefits. State the author's counter-argument that both past and recent tech equally reshaped their respective times.

A prevailing perspective posits that the earlier advancements in technology have had a more profound impact on the lives of ordinary individuals than the recent ones. While I acknowledge the significant contributions of both, I contend that they are equally transformative in their own respective eras.

Body 1 · View 1

Discuss how past technologies (electricity, cars) drastically changed lives and work. Provide examples: electricity improved productivity/convenience; cars revolutionized transport, boosting economy/interaction.

The advent of technologies such as electricity and the automobile in the earlier period revolutionized the way people lived and worked. The introduction of electricity, for instance, not only illuminated homes but also powered various appliances, thereby enhancing productivity and convenience. Similarly, the invention of the automobile transformed transportation, making long-distance travel more accessible and efficient, which in turn facilitated economic growth and cultural exchange.

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Argue that recent technologies (internet, smartphones) also have significant effects. Explain examples: internet made information access democratic; smartphones put info at fingertips, changing various aspects of life and spurring new economic sectors/jobs.

However, the impact of recent technological advancements, such as the internet and smartphones, should not be underestimated. The internet, for example, has democratized access to information, thereby empowering individuals and fostering a more informed society. This has been further amplified by the proliferation of smartphones, which have made this wealth of information readily available at our fingertips, thus transforming the way we learn, communicate, and entertain ourselves. Furthermore, these recent technologies have also catalyzed the growth of new industries, such as e-commerce and digital marketing, thereby creating new employment opportunities and contributing to economic development.

Conclusion

Summarize that both past (electricity/cars) and recent (internet/smartphones) technologies significantly reshaped lives in different ways. Conclude that both are equally important and played crucial roles.

In conclusion, while earlier technologies like electricity and automobiles fundamentally altered the lifestyles of ordinary people, recent advancements such as the internet and smartphones have equally reshaped our lives in different ways. Therefore, it would be unjust to undermine the significance of either, as both have been instrumental in shaping the society we live in today.

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