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Two-part question MoneySocietyWorld Essay #442
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past.

Why is this? What can be learned from this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Use the plan, then compare with Band 9.
277 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Introduces the topic of decreasing happiness in wealthy nations despite economic growth, and states the essay will discuss the reasons and insights learned.

Economic prosperity has undeniably elevated the living standards in both developed and developing nations, yet the correlation between wealth and happiness in developed countries appears to be diminishing. This essay will explore the reasons behind this paradox and the lessons that can be gleaned from it.

Body 1 · View 1

Discusses reasons for decreasing happiness: increasing stress from modern living (competition, longer work hours, less leisure), and focus on material possessions leading to dissatisfaction (never-ending cycle of wanting).

The first reason for this discrepancy is the escalating pressure and stress associated with modern life. As societies become more affluent, the competition for resources intensifies, leading to increased work hours and less time for leisure and relaxation. Secondly, the materialistic culture prevalent in developed nations often leads to a sense of dissatisfaction. For instance, the constant desire to upgrade to the latest technology or fashion trends can create a perpetual cycle of discontent, as individuals are never able to fully satiate their material desires.

Body 2 · View 2

Discusses lessons learned: importance of balance (work-life balance is crucial), and importance of contentment/gratitude (avoiding comparison).

Transitioning to the second question, this situation offers a profound lesson about the nature of happiness and its relationship with wealth. The first lesson is the importance of balance in life. While economic prosperity is crucial, it is equally important to maintain a healthy work-life balance, as an overemphasis on wealth accumulation can lead to stress and burnout. Secondly, this scenario underscores the significance of contentment. As the adage goes, "Comparison is the thief of joy." Therefore, cultivating a sense of gratitude and contentment, rather than constantly comparing oneself to others, can lead to a more fulfilling life.

Conclusion

Summarizes the main points: causes (stress, materialism) and lessons (balance, contentment).

In conclusion, the diminishing happiness in developed countries despite economic growth can be attributed to the stress of modern life and the dissatisfaction stemming from a materialistic culture. The lessons to be learned from this situation emphasize the importance of balance and contentment in the pursuit of happiness.

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