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Discuss both views EducationSociety Essay #42
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

There are two sides to the debate about how to handle misbehaving students. Some people think that it's important to separate them from the rest of the students in order to keep order and discipline. On the other hand, there are those who believe that there are alternative methods that would be more effective.

In this essay, we will explore both perspectives and I will also share my own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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258 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase the two main views on handling disruptive students (isolation vs. different strategies). State author's preference (favors different strategies).

A dichotomy of opinions exists regarding the management of unruly students; some advocate for their segregation to uphold discipline, while others propose alternative methods. My inclination leans towards the latter approach.

Body 1 · View 1

Present the arguments for isolating disruptive students. Point 1: Discourages other students (with example). Point 2: Allows teachers to focus and protects learning environment (with example).

Proponents of the segregation method argue that it serves as a deterrent, discouraging other students from adopting disruptive behaviours. For instance, in a school where such a policy was implemented, a significant decrease in classroom disruptions was observed over time. This policy, they argue, also allows educators to focus on teaching without constant interruptions. Moreover, they believe that it safeguards the learning environment for well-behaved students, who might otherwise be distracted. A study conducted in a large urban school district, for example, revealed that classrooms with disruptive students had lower overall academic performance.

Body 2 · View 2

Present the arguments for alternative strategies (author's preferred view). Point 1: Comprehensive behavior programs addressing root causes (with example). Point 2: Parental involvement (with example).

Despite these arguments, I align myself with those who advocate for alternative methods. One such method is the implementation of comprehensive behavioural programs, which can address the root causes of misbehaviour. For instance, a school in New Zealand saw a dramatic decrease in disruptive behaviour after introducing a program that focused on emotional intelligence and conflict resolution. Additionally, involving parents more actively in their children's education can also be beneficial. A study in the UK found that when parents were regularly updated about their child's behaviour and academic progress, there was a marked improvement in the child's conduct and academic performance.

Conclusion

Summarize the debate (isolation vs. alternatives). Reiterate the preference for alternative strategies (behavior programs and parental involvement) as more complete and effective.

In conclusion, while the segregation of disruptive students may have its merits, the alternative methods, particularly comprehensive behavioural programs and parental involvement, present a more holistic and effective approach to managing classroom discipline.

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