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Positive or negative TravelSociety Essay #637
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Nowadays, more people travel abroad for tourism than ever before.

Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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240 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase the rise in international tourism. State that positives outweigh negatives.

It is true that international tourism has seen an unprecedented surge in recent years, with more people crossing borders for leisure than ever before. Although there are some negative consequences of this trend, I would argue that there are far stronger positive impacts.

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Discuss negatives: 1. Environmental impact/carbon footprint. 2. Degradation/commercialization of local cultures.

The main negative aspect of this development is the significant ecological footprint associated with global aviation. The carbon emissions from frequent long-haul flights contribute substantially to climate change, posing a long-term threat to the planet. Additionally, over-tourism can lead to the degradation of local cultures and historical sites. When popular destinations are swamped by visitors, original traditions are often commercialized or lost to cater to foreign tastes. This can result in a loss of authentic cultural identity for the host community.

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Discuss positives: 1. Economic growth and job creation. 2. Promotion of cross-cultural understanding.

Despite the disadvantages mentioned above, I believe that this trend is a positive development for two reasons. Firstly, tourism serves as a vital economic catalyst for many developing nations. It creates millions of jobs in the hospitality and service sectors, directly improving the standard of living for local residents. Secondly, traveling abroad fosters cross-cultural understanding and empathy. By experiencing different ways of life firsthand, tourists often shed prejudices, which promotes global harmony and reduces international friction in an increasingly connected world.

Conclusion

Summarize that economic and social benefits make this a positive trend despite environmental concerns.

In conclusion, while I recognize the possible environmental and cultural downsides of mass tourism, I consider it to be a positive development overall because of its economic benefits and its ability to promote global understanding.

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