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Causes, effects and solutions HealthTech Essay #649
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Some people today prefer to get advice for medical problems and do not want to visit a doctor.

Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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244 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Identify the trend of self-diagnosis over visiting doctors. State intent to discuss causes and argue it is negative.

It is true that an increasing number of individuals are opting for self-diagnosis or online consultations instead of traditional medical visits. This essay will examine the causes of this behavior and argue that it is a dangerous and negative development.

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Causes: 1. Accessibility of internet/AI symptom checkers. 2. High costs and wait times in professional healthcare.

A major cause of this situation is the immediate accessibility of health information on the internet. With vast databases and AI-driven symptom checkers available at their fingertips, many people feel they can bypass the inconvenience of booking an appointment. Another factor that this problem can be attributed to is the escalating cost and long waiting times associated with professional healthcare. In many regions, the financial burden of a consultation or the weeks-long delay to see a specialist drives patients toward cheaper, immediate alternatives online.

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Evaluation (Negative): 1. Risk of misinformation and incorrect medication. 2. Progression of treatable illnesses due to delay.

However, I am convinced that this is a negative trend due to the high risk of misinformation and misdiagnosis. Medical websites often provide generalized information that may not account for an individual's specific history, leading people to take incorrect medications or ignore serious underlying conditions. Furthermore, avoiding doctors can result in the progression of treatable illnesses. By the time a person realizes their self-treatment is failing, the condition may have reached a stage where it is significantly harder for professionals to manage.

Conclusion

Summarize causes (tech and costs) and negative evaluation (risks and delays).

In conclusion, the ease of internet access and the high cost of healthcare are the main reasons people avoid doctors. I believe this is a negative development because it leads to dangerous health mistakes and delays vital treatment.

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