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Causes, effects and solutions Nature Essay #287
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining.

Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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267 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase the topic of declining animal and plant species. State that the essay will discuss the causes and possible solutions.

The global decline in biodiversity, particularly the dwindling numbers of animals and plants, is a pressing concern. This essay aims to explore the reasons behind this occurrence and propose potential solutions.

Body 1 · Causes

Discuss the main reasons for the decline: habitat destruction due to human actions (deforestation, urbanization) with an example (Amazon rainforest loss), and climate change altering natural habitats with an example (polar bears and melting Arctic ice).

The first major cause of this decline is habitat destruction, primarily due to human activities such as deforestation and urbanization. For instance, the Amazon rainforest, often referred to as the 'lungs of the Earth', has lost approximately 17% of its forest cover in the last 50 years, leading to a significant reduction in species diversity. Another contributing factor is climate change, which alters the natural habitats of many species, making survival increasingly difficult. The polar bear, for instance, is facing extinction as the Arctic ice, its primary habitat, is rapidly melting due to global warming.

Body 2 · Solutions

Discuss possible solutions: strengthening environmental laws to protect habitats with an example (US Endangered Species Act), and combating climate change (reducing emissions, promoting renewable energy) with an example (Paris Agreement).

Transitioning to the second part of the discussion, it is imperative to address the ways in which this issue can be mitigated. One potential solution is the implementation of stricter environmental laws that protect natural habitats from destruction. For example, the Endangered Species Act in the United States has been instrumental in the recovery of numerous species, including the bald eagle. Furthermore, efforts should be made to combat climate change, such as reducing greenhouse gas emissions and promoting renewable energy. The Paris Agreement, a global initiative to combat climate change, is a prime example of such collective efforts.

Conclusion

Summarize the main causes (habitat destruction, climate change) and solutions (stronger laws, global climate action) discussed, expressing hope for stopping or reversing the trend.

In conclusion, the decline in animal and plant species can be attributed to habitat destruction and climate change. However, through the enforcement of stringent environmental laws and global initiatives to combat climate change, it is possible to halt and potentially reverse this trend.

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