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Causes, effects and solutions HealthTech Essay #409
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Some people today prefer to get advice for medical problems and do not want to visit a doctor.

Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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264 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase topic (people seeking medical advice without seeing a doctor). State essay will discuss reasons and whether it is positive or negative.

The contemporary era has seen a shift in people's preference for seeking medical advice, with many opting for non-traditional methods instead of consulting a doctor. This essay aims to explore the reasons behind this trend and evaluate whether it is a positive or negative development.

Body 1 · View 1

Discuss reasons for the change: Ease of online information (check symptoms, saves time/effort) and high cost of healthcare (online/pharmacist cheaper).

The first reason for this shift is the convenience offered by the internet. The plethora of medical information available online allows individuals to diagnose their symptoms without leaving their homes, thereby saving time and effort. Secondly, the high cost of healthcare, particularly in countries without universal healthcare, is a significant deterrent. A simple online search or consultation with a pharmacist often costs significantly less than a doctor's appointment, making it a more appealing option for many.

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Discuss the positive/negative aspects: Positive (encourages self-reliance, health management, BUT risks misdiagnosis/self-treatment). Negative (downplays professional advice, risks serious problems from ignoring expertise).

Transitioning to the second question, it is crucial to assess the implications of this trend. On one hand, this development can be seen as positive as it promotes self-reliance and empowers individuals to take control of their health. However, this must be done with caution as self-diagnosis can lead to misinterpretation of symptoms and potentially harmful self-treatment. On the other hand, this trend could be viewed negatively as it undermines the importance of professional medical advice. Doctors undergo rigorous training to accurately diagnose and treat illnesses, and bypassing their expertise could lead to serious health risks.

Conclusion

Summarize reasons (online convenience, cost) and effects (independence benefits vs. risks of misdiagnosis/undervaluing doctors).

In conclusion, the shift towards self-diagnosis and treatment can be attributed to the convenience of online resources and the high cost of professional healthcare. However, while this development promotes autonomy in health management, it also carries potential risks, including misdiagnosis and the devaluation of professional medical advice.

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