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Discuss both views Society Essay #322
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Use the plan, then compare with Band 9.
287 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase the topic (stability vs. change). State own opinion favoring change.

There exists a dichotomy of perspectives on life's approach: one that advocates for stability and routine, and another that champions change and novelty. My personal inclination leans towards the latter, the embracement of change as a positive force.

Body 1 · View 1

Topic sentence: Reasons for preferring a consistent life. Points: Routine provides safety/predictability (planning lives better, daily routine example), leads to expertise (musician example).

Those who venerate consistency in life have their justifications. Firstly, they argue that routine provides a sense of security and predictability, which can be comforting in an often chaotic world. For instance, adhering to a fixed daily schedule can eliminate the stress of uncertainty and enable individuals to plan their lives effectively. Secondly, they contend that avoiding change allows for mastery in a specific field or skill. As an illustration, a musician who dedicates their life to mastering one instrument, rather than dabbling in many, may achieve a higher level of expertise and recognition.

Body 2 · View 2

Topic sentence: Change is a crucial/good part of life. Points: Encourages personal growth/development (learn skills, changing jobs example), sparks innovation/progress (tech industry/Apple/Google example). Explicitly state siding with this view.

However, despite these compelling arguments, I align myself with those who perceive change as an essential aspect of life. The primary reason being that change fosters personal growth and development. When we expose ourselves to new experiences or challenges, we acquire new skills and perspectives, thereby enriching our lives. For example, a person who changes their job frequently might gain a diverse skill set and a broader understanding of different industries. Furthermore, change can stimulate innovation and progress. This is evident in the technological sector, where constant change and adaptation have led to groundbreaking advancements that have revolutionized our lives. Without the willingness to change, companies like Apple or Google would not have achieved their current success.

Conclusion

Summarize arguments for both views (routine vs. change benefits). Restate opinion: Benefits of welcoming change (growth, innovation) outweigh those of routine.

In conclusion, while the arguments for maintaining routine and avoiding change are valid, I believe that the benefits of embracing change, such as personal growth and the potential for innovation, make it a more compelling approach to life.

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