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Positive or negative Society Essay #455
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Due to population growth many people these days live in apartments with limited space and no outdoor areas.

Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Use the plan, then compare with Band 9.
239 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

The escalating population growth has led to an increased number of individuals residing in compact apartments, devoid of outdoor spaces. Despite the potential benefits, I believe the disadvantages of this trend are more significant.

Body 1

On the positive side, living in smaller apartments can lead to a more efficient and minimalist lifestyle. As space is limited, residents are compelled to prioritize their possessions, thereby reducing unnecessary clutter and promoting a more organized living environment. Additionally, the absence of outdoor areas can result in lower maintenance responsibilities. Without gardens or yards to tend to, individuals can save both time and resources, which can be redirected towards other productive activities.

Body 2

However, the drawbacks of this living arrangement seem more profound. Primarily, the lack of outdoor spaces can significantly limit the opportunities for physical activities, leading to potential health issues. For instance, children living in such apartments may not have sufficient space for play, which is crucial for their physical development and overall well-being. Furthermore, the absence of personal outdoor spaces can lead to a disconnect from nature. This lack of interaction with the natural environment can result in increased stress levels and a lower quality of life, as numerous studies have shown the therapeutic benefits of nature.

Conclusion

In conclusion, while the efficiency and reduced maintenance associated with living in small apartments are noteworthy, the negative impact on physical health and the disconnection from nature make the disadvantages of this trend more substantial.

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