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Agree or disagree Society Essay #266
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Whether or not someone achieves success is a question of luck.

To what extent Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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286 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase topic (success and luck). State opinion: luck plays a part, but is not the only factor.

It is a widely held belief that the attainment of success is purely a matter of luck. While I concur that fortune plays a role in one's achievement, I contest the notion that it is the sole determinant.

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Discuss how luck can impact success. Examples: influential meeting (requires action), wealthy birth (requires work to maintain).

Undeniably, luck can significantly influence one's path to success. For instance, a serendipitous encounter with a well-connected individual can open doors to opportunities that would otherwise remain inaccessible. This fortuitous meeting, however, is not the end but rather the beginning of a journey, and it is the individual's responsibility to seize the opportunity and make the most of it. Furthermore, luck can also manifest in the form of being born into a wealthy family, which provides a head start in life. Yet, this advantage only sets the stage for success; it does not guarantee it, as the individual must still strive to maintain and build upon the inherited wealth.

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Argue against success being *only* luck; focus on hard work/persistence. Examples: entrepreneurs (determination), artists/athletes (training).

On the other hand, attributing success solely to luck overlooks the importance of hard work and perseverance. Consider the case of self-made entrepreneurs who, despite humble beginnings, have climbed the ladder of success through sheer determination and grit. Their journey to the top was not a stroke of luck, but a testament to their relentless pursuit of their goals. Similarly, many accomplished artists and athletes have reached the pinnacle of their careers not by chance, but through years of rigorous training and practice. Their success is a product of their dedication and commitment, rather than a lucky break.

Conclusion

Summarize: luck helps, but hard work/persistence is crucial. Reiterate that success isn't just luck, and hard work is vital.

In conclusion, while luck can provide a stepping stone to success, it is the individual's perseverance and hard work that truly pave the way. Conversely, attributing success solely to luck undermines the significance of diligence and determination in achieving one's goals.

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