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Agree or disagree MediaEducationFamily Essay #342
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Some people believe that television programmes are of no real value for children.

To what extent Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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267 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase the belief that TV programmes have no real value for children. State partial agreement (some shows not beneficial) but disagreement with the idea that all content is worthless.

It is a widely held belief that television programmes offer no substantial value for children. While I concur that certain programmes may not contribute to a child's development, I cannot agree with the absolute assertion that all television content is devoid of value.

Body 1 · View 1

Topic sentence: Some TV shows can harm children's development. Point 1: Display of violence/negative actions (e.g., Tom and Jerry) may promote aggressive behavior. Point 2: Long hours lead to inactive lifestyles, causing health problems like obesity.

Undoubtedly, some television programmes are indeed detrimental to children's development. The first reason for this is the prevalence of violence and negative behaviours often portrayed in these shows. For instance, cartoons such as 'Tom and Jerry' often depict characters engaging in violent acts, which may inadvertently encourage aggressive behaviour in children. Furthermore, the excessive screen time associated with watching television can lead to sedentary habits. This could result in physical health issues such as obesity, as children may prefer watching television to engaging in physical activities.

Body 2 · View 2

Topic sentence: Claiming all TV shows are worthless is an exaggeration. Point 1: Educational shows (e.g., Sesame Street) teach knowledge, reading, social skills. Point 2: Nature/wildlife shows (e.g., Planet Earth) instill love/respect for the environment and teach about biodiversity.

However, to assert that all television programmes lack value is an overstatement. Educational programmes, for instance, can be a rich source of knowledge for children. Shows like 'Sesame Street' or 'Dora the Explorer' not only entertain but also impart important lessons on numeracy, literacy, and social skills. Moreover, programmes that showcase nature and wildlife can foster a love for the environment and an understanding of biodiversity. For example, 'Planet Earth' or 'Blue Planet' can inspire curiosity and respect for the natural world, potentially shaping environmentally conscious citizens.

Conclusion

Summarize the contrasting points: potential harm from some shows vs. significant benefits from educational/nature content. Reiterate the opinion: some shows encourage negative behaviors, but not all TV content is worthless.

In conclusion, while I agree that certain television programmes can promote negative behaviours and unhealthy habits, I believe that educational and nature-based content can provide significant value. Conversely, while I disagree with the blanket statement that all television content lacks value, I acknowledge the potential harm of violent and sedentary-inducing programmes.

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