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Causes, effects and solutions MoneyCultureSociety Essay #396
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Some people believe that nowadays too much money is being spent on weddings and birthdays.

Why do you think it is happening? What can be done to improve the situation?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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218 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase topic (rising costs). State essay will discuss why (causes) and what can be done (solutions).

The escalating expenditure on weddings and birthdays has become a matter of concern for many. This essay aims to explore the reasons behind this trend and suggest potential solutions to rectify the situation.

Body 1 · View 1

Discuss causes of high spending. Point 1: Social pressure to show off wealth/status leads to overspending. Point 2: Social media influence prompts copying grandness, exceeding budgets.

The first reason for this surge in spending is the societal pressure to exhibit affluence. People often feel compelled to host extravagant events to maintain their social standing, which inadvertently leads to excessive expenditure. Furthermore, the proliferation of social media platforms has exacerbated this issue. Individuals, lured by the ostentatious displays of wealth on these platforms, often feel the need to replicate such grandeur in their own celebrations, thereby inflating their budgets.

Body 2 · View 2

Discuss solutions to the problem. Solution 1: Change societal views to value emotional meaning over cost. Solution 2: Regulatory authorities could set spending limits.

Transitioning to potential solutions, one effective measure could be implementing a societal shift in perspective. By promoting the idea that the value of these events lies in their emotional significance rather than their monetary cost, we could potentially curb this trend of overspending. Additionally, regulatory bodies could introduce guidelines on spending limits for such events. This would not only prevent exorbitant spending but also foster a culture of financial responsibility and prudence.

Conclusion

Summarize main points (causes: social pressure/social media; solutions: change views/set rules). Restate potential to lessen problem.

In conclusion, the increasing expenditure on weddings and birthdays can be attributed to societal pressures and the influence of social media. However, by altering societal perceptions and introducing regulatory measures, we can mitigate this issue and promote more financially responsible celebrations.

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