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Discuss both views Education Essay #230
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Some people believe that universities should only accept students with the highest marks while others believe that some students with low marks should have an opportunity.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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282 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase the topic presenting the two opposing views on university admissions (highest marks vs. lower marks). State own opinion supporting the inclusion of lower-scoring students.

In the realm of higher education, a dichotomy of opinions exists: some individuals assert that universities should solely admit students with the highest academic scores, while others advocate for the inclusion of lower-scoring students. I align myself with the latter perspective, championing the notion of equal opportunity.

Body 1 · View 1

Discuss the arguments for accepting only top-scoring students. Point 1: Maintains high educational standards and creates a competitive atmosphere, improving reputation. Point 2: High-achieving students are likely to make significant contributions after graduation.

Those who advocate for the exclusive acceptance of high-scoring students have their reasons. They argue that such a policy ensures a high standard of education, as only the most academically capable students are admitted. This, they believe, fosters a competitive environment that pushes students to excel, ultimately enhancing the reputation of the institution. Furthermore, they contend that high-achieving students are more likely to contribute significantly to their fields of study post-graduation. This, in their view, validates the university's investment in these students, as their success reflects positively on the institution.

Body 2 · View 2

Present the arguments for giving chances to students with lower scores and elaborate on own opinion. Point 1: Academic scores don't always reflect potential (Example: Einstein). Point 2: Universities should focus on personal growth and character development, not just academics, which can benefit society.

However, despite these arguments, I firmly believe in the importance of providing opportunities to students with lower marks. Firstly, academic scores are not always an accurate reflection of a student's potential. For instance, Albert Einstein, one of the greatest minds in history, was not a high-achieving student, yet his contributions to physics are unparalleled. Secondly, universities should not merely be bastions of academic excellence, but also platforms for personal growth and character development. A student who may not excel acadically might possess exceptional leadership skills or creativity, attributes that can be honed in a university setting, ultimately benefiting society.

Conclusion

Summarize the main arguments discussed (reasons for prioritizing high-achievers vs. reasons for inclusivity). Restate own opinion favoring giving opportunities regardless of academic scores due to undiscovered talent and personal growth potential.

In conclusion, while there are valid arguments for prioritizing high-achieving students in university admissions, I believe the case for inclusivity is stronger. The potential for unrecognized brilliance and the opportunity for personal growth underscore the importance of providing opportunities to students irrespective of their academic scores.

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