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Positive or negative MoneySociety Essay #636
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Nowadays, it is easier for young people to have a credit card compared to the past.

Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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240 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Paraphrase the situation regarding credit card accessibility. State that disadvantages outweigh advantages.

It is true that credit cards have become significantly more accessible to the younger generation than in previous eras. Although there are some advantages of this trend, I would argue that there are far stronger disadvantages.

Body 1 · View 1

Discuss positives: 1. Safety net for emergencies. 2. Building a credit history for the future. (Lighter side).

The main positive aspect of this development is that it provides an invaluable safety net for emergencies. When unforeseen circumstances arise, young people can manage urgent costs without immediate cash flow, offering them a degree of financial independence. Furthermore, early access allows individuals to establish a credit history. By managing small balances responsibly, they build a credit score that is essential for securing future mortgages or business loans. However, this requires a level of maturity that many youth have not yet attained.

Body 2 · View 2

Discuss negatives: 1. Accumulation of debt/impulse spending. 2. Lack of financial discipline/fiscal mismanagement. (Heavier side).

Despite the advantages mentioned above, I believe that this trend is a negative development for two reasons. Firstly, easy access to credit often leads to the accumulation of debilitating debt through impulsive spending. Without a steady income, many young users succumb to the temptation of luxury purchases, resulting in high-interest burdens that take years to clear. Secondly, this trend fosters a lack of financial discipline. Relying on 'invisible' money prevents young people from understanding the tangible value of earnings, which can lead to long-term fiscal mismanagement.

Conclusion

Summarize that the risks of debt and poor discipline make this a negative trend despite the convenience.

In conclusion, while I recognize the possible benefits of emergency security and credit building, I consider it to be a negative development overall because of the high risk of debt and the erosion of financial responsibility.

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