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Discuss both views CultureSocietyFamily Essay #357
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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282 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Introduce the debate between following traditions and individual behavior, and state the author's preference for individuality.

In the realm of societal norms, a dichotomy exists between those who advocate for youth adherence to traditional customs and those who champion individualistic behavior. My inclination leans towards the latter, the freedom of individual expression.

Body 1 · View 1

Argue that following traditions promotes unity and continuity (Obon festival example) and offers moral guidance (respect for elders example).

Those who argue for the preservation of societal traditions believe that such practices foster unity and continuity. For instance, in Japan, the annual Obon festival, a tradition dating back centuries, brings families together, reinforcing familial bonds and societal harmony. This festival not only strengthens family ties but also ensures the transmission of cultural heritage to younger generations. Additionally, proponents of this view contend that traditions provide a moral compass, guiding young people's behavior. The practice of respect for elders in many cultures, for example, instills values of humility and deference, which are seen as essential for societal cohesion.

Body 2 · View 2

Argue (from the author's perspective) that individuality encourages creativity and innovation (Steve Jobs example) and supports personal development and self-discovery (Malala Yousafzai example).

However, I align with those who believe in the importance of individuality, despite the compelling arguments above. The first reason is that individuality fosters creativity and innovation, which are vital for societal progress. Take the case of Steve Jobs, whose non-conformist approach led to groundbreaking innovations in technology, revolutionizing the way we communicate. His story underscores the potential of individualistic behavior to catalyze societal advancement. Secondly, individuality promotes personal growth and self-discovery. By exploring different paths, young people can identify their passions and strengths, leading to a more fulfilling life. For example, Malala Yousafzai, by choosing to advocate for girls' education in a traditional society, discovered her calling and has since made significant strides in promoting gender equality.

Conclusion

Summarize the points for traditions and individuality, concluding that individuality's advantages are stronger.

In conclusion, while the preservation of traditions can foster unity and provide moral guidance, the benefits of individuality, such as fostering creativity and promoting personal growth, present a stronger case.

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