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Causes, effects and solutions SocietyWorkFamily Essay #192
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside.

Why do think this is? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Use the plan, then compare with Band 9.
268 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

Introduce the trend of young people moving from rural to urban areas, leaving older people in the countryside, and state that the essay will examine the reasons and impacts.

The phenomenon of youth migration from rural to urban areas, leaving the elderly behind in the countryside, is becoming increasingly prevalent. This essay aims to explore the reasons behind this trend and evaluate whether it is a beneficial or detrimental development.

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Discuss the reasons for young people moving: better education/job opportunities and the appeal of exciting city life compared to limited countryside activities.

The primary reason for this migration trend is the pursuit of better educational and employment opportunities. Urban areas, with their plethora of universities and job markets, offer a wider array of prospects for young individuals, thereby attracting them. Furthermore, the allure of a vibrant city life, brimming with cultural and social activities, is another significant factor. The countryside, with its limited social events and recreational facilities, may seem dull in comparison, prompting the youth to seek the excitement of city life.

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Discuss the effects/impacts of this trend: positive for cities (diversity, economic growth, cultural diversity) but negative for the countryside (population decline, farming decline, increased elderly loneliness and potential care issues).

Transitioning to the second question, it is imperative to assess the implications of this trend. On one hand, this development can be seen as positive because it leads to a more diverse and dynamic urban population. The influx of young individuals can stimulate economic growth and cultural exchange in cities. On the other hand, the depopulation of rural areas can lead to a decline in agricultural productivity and an increase in the isolation of the elderly. This could potentially exacerbate issues of food security and elderly care in the countryside.

Conclusion

Summarize the main points, reiterating the primary reasons for the movement (opportunities, lifestyle) and the dual effects (benefits cities, creates significant problems for the countryside, particularly concerning farming and elderly care).

In conclusion, the migration of young people from rural to urban areas is primarily driven by the quest for better opportunities and a more vibrant lifestyle. While this trend enriches urban areas with a dynamic population, it simultaneously poses significant challenges for the rural areas left behind, particularly in terms of agricultural productivity and elderly care.

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