IELTS HUB
Combination retailTurkeyjeans Graph #58
Academic Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.

Combination: Jeans sales and market share in Turkey (visual 1 of 2)Combination: Jeans sales and market share in Turkey (visual 2 of 2)

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

One box per paragraph, then compare with Band 9.
197 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

The bar graph illustrates the anticipated sales of jeans by two firms in Turkey for the forthcoming year, while the pie chart demonstrates the expected market share of these companies in the jeans sector by the end of the same year.

Overview

A general overview of the bar chart reveals that Company A is predicted to have higher sales than Company B. The pie chart, on the other hand, forecasts a near equal market share for both companies by the end of the year.

Body 1

Looking more closely at the bar graph, it is evident that Company A's sales are projected to be significantly higher, at around 20 million pairs of jeans, compared to approximately 15 million for Company B. This suggests that Company A's jeans may be more popular or better marketed.

Body 2

However, the pie chart indicates a different scenario in terms of market share. Despite lower sales, Company B is expected to hold nearly half of the market share, at 49%, while Company A, with higher sales, is predicted to have a slightly larger share of 51%. This discrepancy may be due to Company B having a wider variety of products or a more diversified customer base.

How our answers are made

Go further with the books

Academic Task 1

100 Band 9 Task 1 Samples

Real Exam Charts, Maps, and Processes

₹299$9.99CAD 13.99AUD 14.99£7.99NZD 16.99€8.99AED 39SGD 12.99

Free preview

Academic Task 1

IELTS Academic Task 1, Decoded

Graphs, Maps, and Processes Explained

₹299$9.99CAD 13.99AUD 14.99£7.99NZD 16.99€8.99AED 39SGD 12.99

Free preview

Writing Task 2

100 Essential IELTS Essays

Band 9 Sample Answers for the Real Exam

₹199$6.99CAD 8.99AUD 9.99£4.99NZD 10.99€5.99AED 24SGD 8.99

Free preview

Next question: Line Graph #59