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Formal Complaint Letter #149
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You live in a room in the college hostel which has severe problems. You would like to move into another room and need your hostel super's permission for that.

Write a letter to the hostel super. In your letter,

  • introduce yourself
  • describe the problems
  • explain what type of room you would prefer

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

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194 words · 3 body paragraphs
Salutation

Dear Hostel Supervisor,

Opening

I hope this letter finds you well.

Bullet 1

introduce yourself

My name is [Your Name], a second-year student residing in room 205 of the college hostel. Unfortunately, I am writing to bring to your attention the severe problems I have been facing in my current room. The main issues include persistent leaks from the ceiling during heavy rains, a malfunctioning air conditioning unit that does not cool the room adequately, and a broken window that compromises the security of the room.

Bullet 2

describe the problems

These problems have been affecting my ability to study and rest properly, impacting my academic performance. Therefore, I kindly request your permission to move into a different room that is in better condition. I would greatly appreciate your assistance in resolving this matter promptly to ensure a conducive living environment for my studies.

Bullet 3

explain what type of room you would prefer

Ideally, I would prefer a room on a higher floor to avoid the issues with leaks, with a properly functioning air conditioning unit and secure windows. A quieter location within the hostel would also be beneficial for my concentration and overall well-being.

Closing

I look forward to your favorable consideration of my request. Thank you for your attention to this matter.

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