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Formal Request Letter #154
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The local government is planning to change the bus timetable. You are not happy about the proposed changes. You have decided to write about it to the editor of a local newspaper.

Write a letter to the newspaper. In the letter,

  • describe the changes
  • explain how that will affect you
  • say how you would like the service to be improved

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

One box per bullet, then compare with Band 9.
211 words · 3 body paragraphs
Opening

I am writing to express my concerns regarding the proposed changes to the local bus timetable.

Bullet 1

describe the changes

The local government is planning to reduce the frequency of buses during peak hours, which will result in longer waiting times for commuters. Additionally, they intend to eliminate certain routes, making it more challenging for residents in outlying areas to access essential services and employment opportunities.

Bullet 2

explain how that will affect you

As a regular bus user, these changes will have a significant impact on my daily routine. The increased waiting times and reduced accessibility will not only inconvenience me but also hinder my ability to commute to work and run errands efficiently. This will ultimately lead to a decrease in productivity and an increase in stress levels.

Bullet 3

say how you would like the service to be improved

I urge the local government to reconsider their proposed changes and instead focus on improving the existing bus services. Increasing the frequency of buses during peak hours and maintaining all current routes would ensure that residents have reliable and convenient access to public transportation. Moreover, investing in newer and more eco-friendly buses would attract more commuters and contribute to a greener environment.

Closing

In conclusion, I hope that my concerns are taken into consideration, and that the local government works towards enhancing the bus services for the benefit of the community as a whole.

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