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Formal Information Letter #163
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found that some information is wrong.

Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter, write:

  • what the article is about
  • what the error is
  • what you expect the editor to do

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

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213 words · 3 body paragraphs
Opening

I am writing to bring to your attention an inaccuracy in a recent article published in your newspaper.

Bullet 1

what the article is about

The article in question revolves around my friend, Sarah Johnson, who was featured for her work in promoting environmental sustainability in our community. While the article commendably highlighted Sarah's efforts in organizing recycling drives and tree planting events, it inaccurately stated that she had won a prestigious environmental award, which is not the case. Sarah has not received any such award.

Bullet 2

what the error is

The error in stating that Sarah won an environmental award misrepresents her accomplishments and could potentially mislead readers about her contributions to the community. As someone who knows Sarah personally and is familiar with her work, I believe it is crucial to correct this misinformation to ensure the integrity and accuracy of the article.

Bullet 3

what you expect the editor to do

I kindly request that the editor issue a correction in the next edition of the newspaper to rectify this error. It is important for the public to have access to accurate information, especially when it concerns individuals who are making a positive impact in our community. I trust that the editor will take the necessary steps to address this issue promptly.

Closing

Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to seeing the correction in the upcoming publication.

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