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Formal Request Letter #186
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Your child is going on a trip to another country for a week. The school authority is looking for some parents who can join the trip. You are interested in going with the children.

Write a letter to the head of the school. In your letter,

  • say why you want to join the team
  • mention what you can do to assist
  • also ask questions related to the trip

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

One box per bullet, then compare with Band 9.
197 words · 3 body paragraphs
Opening

I am writing to express my keen interest in accompanying the students on the upcoming trip to another country.

Bullet 1

say why you want to join the team

As a parent, I believe it is crucial to actively participate in my child's educational experiences outside the classroom. By joining the team, I can provide additional supervision and support to ensure the safety and well-being of all the students. My presence will also offer reassurance to both the school authority and the children's parents.

Bullet 2

mention what you can do to assist

I am willing to assist in various ways during the trip, such as organizing group activities, helping with logistics, and ensuring that all students follow the itinerary and guidelines set by the school. Additionally, I can use my communication skills to facilitate interactions between the students and locals, enhancing their cultural learning experience.

Bullet 3

also ask questions related to the trip

I would appreciate more information about the trip, such as the detailed itinerary, accommodation arrangements, emergency protocols, and any specific requirements for parent volunteers. Could you also clarify the roles and responsibilities expected from parents joining the trip to ensure that I can fully contribute to the team?

Closing

I am looking forward to the opportunity to be part of this enriching experience and contribute positively to the students' learning journey.

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