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Formal Application Letter #221
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.

Write a letter to the parents. In your letter

  • explain why you would like the job
  • give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
  • say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

One box per bullet, then compare with Band 9.
277 words · 3 body paragraphs
Salutation

Dear Parents,

Bullet 1

explain why you would like the job

I am writing to express my genuine interest in the opportunity to live with your family and care for your six-year-old child for six months. As someone who is passionate about childcare and has experience working with children, I believe this job aligns perfectly with my skills and interests. I am excited about the prospect of becoming a part of your family and providing a nurturing and supportive environment for your child.

Bullet 2

give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ

I am a responsible and reliable individual with a background in early childhood education. I have previously worked as a preschool teacher, where I honed my ability to engage children in educational and fun activities. I am also certified in pediatric first aid and CPR, ensuring that I can handle any emergencies that may arise. Moreover, my warm and caring nature enables me to build strong connections with children and create a safe and loving environment for them.

Bullet 3

say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

During my free time in Australia, I plan to immerse myself in the local culture and explore the beautiful sights and attractions that the country has to offer. I am particularly interested in visiting the iconic landmarks, trying out traditional Australian cuisine, and participating in outdoor activities such as hiking and surfing. Additionally, I look forward to engaging with the community through volunteer work and cultural exchange programs to broaden my horizons and make meaningful connections.

Closing

I am confident that my qualifications and enthusiasm make me a suitable candidate for this position, and I am eager to bring joy and care to your child's life. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of joining your family.

Sign-off

Warm regards, [Your Name]

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