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Formal Apology Letter #236
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons.

Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter,

  • which course you have applied for
  • why you cannot join the course
  • ask about the possibility of the course in the future

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

One box per bullet, then compare with Band 9.
192 words · 3 body paragraphs
Salutation

Dear Principal,

Bullet 1

which course you have applied for

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to inform you that I had recently applied for the Business Management course at your esteemed college and was thrilled to have been accepted. However, due to unforeseen circumstances, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to join the course as planned.

Bullet 2

why you cannot join the course

The reason for my inability to join the course is a sudden family emergency that requires my immediate attention and presence. I understand the importance of committing to the course and wish I could have informed you sooner. I sincerely apologize for any inconvenience caused by my withdrawal.

Bullet 3

ask about the possibility of the course in the future

I would like to inquire about the possibility of deferring my admission to the Business Management course to the next academic intake. I am genuinely interested in pursuing this course at your college and would be grateful if there is an opportunity to join in the future. Your guidance on the procedures for deferral would be greatly appreciated.

Closing

Thank you for your understanding and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you regarding the possibility of joining the course in the future.

Sign-off

Yours sincerely, [Your Name]

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