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Formal Request Letter #268
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have learned that a financial organisation in your city gives money as a loan to students who like to take a part-time course. You are interested to do the course and have decided to take a loan.

Write a letter to a local financial organisation. In your letter,

  • give your qualifications and work experience
  • give details about the course
  • explain how this course will help you

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

One box per bullet, then compare with Band 9.
210 words · 3 body paragraphs
Opening

I am writing to express my interest in the part-time course offered by your financial organisation and to inquire about the possibility of obtaining a loan to support my studies.

Bullet 1

give your qualifications and work experience

I hold a Bachelor's degree in Business Administration from a reputable university and have three years of work experience in the finance sector. My academic background and professional experience have equipped me with the necessary skills to excel in the course and make a meaningful contribution.

Bullet 2

give details about the course

The part-time course that I am interested in is a Financial Management program that focuses on advanced financial analysis, risk management, and investment strategies. This course aligns perfectly with my career goals of becoming a financial analyst and will enhance my knowledge and expertise in the field.

Bullet 3

explain how this course will help you

Completing this course will not only broaden my understanding of financial concepts but also provide me with practical skills that I can apply in real-world scenarios. It will enable me to stay updated with the latest industry trends and enhance my employability in the competitive job market.

Closing

I am confident that with your support, I will be able to successfully complete the course and achieve my career aspirations. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss the loan application process further. Thank you for considering my request.

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