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Formal Complaint Letter #46
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You eat in your college cafeteria everyday lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements.

Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter,

  • explain what you like about the cafeteria
  • say what is wrong with it
  • suggest how it could be improved

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

One box per bullet, then compare with Band 9.
201 words · 3 body paragraphs
Opening

I am writing to express my thoughts on the college cafeteria, which I frequent for lunch every day.

Bullet 1

explain what you like about the cafeteria

One aspect of the cafeteria that I appreciate is the variety of food options available. The menu caters to different dietary preferences, offering both vegetarian and non-vegetarian choices. The cafeteria staff are also friendly and efficient, creating a pleasant dining experience.

Bullet 2

say what is wrong with it

However, there are some areas that I believe need improvement. Firstly, the seating arrangement is often crowded, especially during peak hours, making it challenging to find a place to sit comfortably. Additionally, the cleanliness of the cafeteria could be better maintained, as there are times when tables are not promptly cleared.

Bullet 3

suggest how it could be improved

To enhance the cafeteria experience, I suggest implementing a reservation system for tables to alleviate overcrowding. This could help students plan their lunch breaks more efficiently. Furthermore, increasing the frequency of cleaning routines and ensuring that all staff members adhere to hygiene protocols would contribute to a more hygienic environment.

Closing

In conclusion, while the cafeteria has its strengths, there is room for improvement to make it a more enjoyable and sanitary space for all students. I hope that these suggestions are taken into consideration for the betterment of our college community.

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