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Formal Request Letter #90
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

As an international student in Sweden, you have an account with a local bank. The monthly bank transfer you receive from your parents has been delayed this month due to an error at your parents’ bank.

Write a letter to your bank. In your letter:

  • introduce yourself and ask for a loan
  • say why you need the money
  • tell how you intend to pay back the money

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

One box per bullet, then compare with Band 9.
232 words · 3 body paragraphs
Salutation

Dear [Bank Name],

Opening

I hope this letter finds you well. My name is [Your Name], and I am an international student currently studying in Sweden. I have been a loyal customer of your bank since I arrived in the country.

Bullet 1

introduce yourself and ask for a loan

I am writing to request a loan of [Amount] due to a delay in receiving my monthly bank transfer from my parents. This delay was caused by an error at my parents' bank, and unfortunately, I am in urgent need of financial assistance to cover my living expenses for this month.

Bullet 2

say why you need the money

The reason I need the money is to pay for my rent, groceries, and other essential expenses. As an international student, I do not have access to other sources of income, and this unexpected delay has put me in a difficult situation. I assure you that I will use the loan responsibly and only for necessary expenses.

Bullet 3

tell how you intend to pay back the money

I intend to pay back the loan as soon as I receive the delayed bank transfer from my parents. I will make timely payments in installments to ensure that the loan is repaid in full. I understand the importance of meeting my financial obligations and will do everything in my power to honor this agreement.

Closing

I kindly request your understanding and assistance in this matter. Your prompt consideration of my request would be greatly appreciated. Thank you for your attention to this urgent matter.

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