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Agree or disagree Nature Essay #155
Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaurs, dodos, etc.). There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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331 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

There is a prevailing belief that the extinction of animal species is a natural occurrence and thus, human intervention to prevent such an event is unnecessary. While I concur that extinction is indeed a part of nature's cycle, I cannot fully endorse the notion that humans should remain passive in the face of such events.

Body 1

The extinction of species is an integral part of evolution, a process that has shaped the diversity of life on Earth. For instance, the demise of the dinosaurs paved the way for mammals to flourish, eventually leading to the rise of humans. This example illustrates the transformative power of extinction, which can catalyze the emergence of new life forms. Furthermore, it is important to recognize that human survival is intertwined with the existence of other species. The loss of certain species can disrupt ecosystems, leading to a domino effect that could potentially harm human life. For example, the extinction of bees, vital pollinators, could drastically affect food production, highlighting the importance of preserving biodiversity.

Body 2

However, the assertion that humans should not intervene to prevent extinction is overly simplistic. Firstly, it is crucial to note that many extinctions are directly caused by human activities such as deforestation and pollution. The dodo, for instance, was driven to extinction due to overhunting by humans, a clear demonstration of our responsibility in these events. Secondly, the preservation of species is not merely a matter of ethics but also of practicality. Biodiversity contributes to the resilience of ecosystems, enabling them to withstand environmental changes. For instance, a diverse forest is more likely to recover from a disease outbreak than a monoculture, underscoring the importance of conservation efforts.

Conclusion

In conclusion, while I agree that extinction is a natural process and that it plays a crucial role in shaping biodiversity and ensuring human survival, I disagree with the notion that humans should not intervene to prevent it. Our actions often contribute to extinction, and preserving biodiversity is vital for the resilience of ecosystems.

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