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Academic Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below shows the percentage participation of men in senior development in three companies between 1980 and the year 2010.

Bar Graph: Men's participation in senior development 1980-2010

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

One box per paragraph, then compare with Band 9.
179 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

The bar graph illustrates the proportion of males involved in high-level management in three different firms from 1980 to 2010.

Overview

In general, all three companies experienced fluctuations in the percentage of men in senior roles over the three-decade period. However, it is noticeable that Company A saw a significant decline, while Company B and C showed an overall increase in male participation at the senior level.

Body 1

In 1980, Company A had the highest percentage of men in senior positions, at around 80%, but this figure dropped dramatically to just over 20% by 2010. In contrast, Company B, which had the lowest percentage in 1980 at approximately 30%, witnessed a steady rise to reach nearly 70% in 2010.

Body 2

Similarly, Company C also saw an upward trend in the male participation in senior roles, increasing from around 50% in 1980 to roughly 60% in 2010. However, this growth was not as pronounced as that of Company B. In conclusion, while the male participation in senior roles decreased in Company A, it increased in Companies B and C during the 30-year period.

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