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Academic Writing Task 1

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The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.

Bar Graph: Expenditure shares in four countries 2009

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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197 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

The bar chart compares the proportion of expenditure in five different categories by four countries: the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in 2009.

Overview

Overall, it can be seen that housing was the most significant expense in all nations except Japan, where it was the second largest. In contrast, the least amount of money was spent on health care in all countries, with the exception of the United States.

Body 1

Looking at the details, the United States spent the most on housing, with over a quarter of their total expenditure going to this category. Similarly, Canada and the UK also allocated a significant portion of their spending to housing, with figures standing at about 20% and 25% respectively. However, in Japan, food was the largest expense, accounting for nearly 25% of total spending.

Body 2

In terms of health care, the United States was the only country where this category accounted for a significant portion of expenditure, at approximately 15%. In contrast, the other three countries spent considerably less on health care, with figures ranging from 5% to less than 10%. The other categories, such as clothing and education, saw similar levels of expenditure across all four nations.

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