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Academic Writing Task 1

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The chart below shows the main reasons for university education among people of different age groups, based on a survey conducted in 2008, and the percentages of students who got support from their employers in this year.

Combination: University education reasons and employer support (visual 1 of 2)Combination: University education reasons and employer support (visual 2 of 2)

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

One box per paragraph, then compare with Band 9.
210 words · 4 paragraphs
Introduction

The bar chart delineates the primary motivations for pursuing university education across various age demographics, as per a survey conducted in 2008, and the proportion of students who received financial assistance from their employers in the same year.

Overview

It is evident from the chart that the primary reason for university education varies significantly across different age groups, with interest in the subject being the most common motivation. Furthermore, the level of employer support fluctuates across age groups, with the highest level of support seen in the 26-29 age bracket.

Body 1

Delving into the details, for those aged under 26, interest in the subject was the most cited reason for university education, followed by career prospects. However, the motivation shifts significantly for those aged 30-39, where career prospects become the primary reason. Interestingly, the percentage of students receiving employer support is highest among those aged 26-29, at approximately 60%.

Body 2

In contrast, those aged 40-49 showed a different trend, with the main motivation being personal development. The percentage of employer support decreases significantly in this age group, standing at around 35%. For those aged 50 and above, the primary reason for pursuing university education was also personal development, but the employer support was the lowest among all age groups, at less than 20%.

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