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Formal Information Letter #176
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You have been working in a company for many years and have noticed that new employees often leave your company.

Write a letter to your higher authority and suggest the possible reasons for that and ways to retain them:

  • Identify the possible reasons why new employees leave
  • Suggest ways to improve employee retention
  • Highlight the benefits of retaining employees for the company

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

One box per bullet, then compare with Band 9.
220 words · 3 body paragraphs
Opening

I am writing to address a concerning trend in our company regarding the high turnover rate of new employees.

Bullet 1

Identify the possible reasons why new employees leave

One possible reason for new employees leaving could be a lack of proper onboarding and training. Without adequate guidance and support in their initial days, new hires may feel overwhelmed and disconnected from the company culture. Additionally, if there is a mismatch between the job expectations set during recruitment and the actual responsibilities, employees are more likely to seek opportunities elsewhere.

Bullet 2

Suggest ways to improve employee retention

To improve employee retention, I suggest implementing a structured onboarding program that includes mentorship, training sessions, and regular check-ins to ensure new employees feel supported and valued. It is also essential to provide clear career development paths and opportunities for growth within the company. Recognizing and rewarding employees for their hard work can boost morale and loyalty.

Bullet 3

Highlight the benefits of retaining employees for the company

Retaining employees is crucial for the company's success as it leads to higher productivity, lower recruitment costs, and a more positive work environment. Long-term employees bring valuable experience and knowledge to the team, contributing to overall stability and growth. By investing in employee retention strategies, we can create a loyal and motivated workforce that drives the company's success.

Closing

I believe that by addressing these issues and prioritizing employee retention, we can create a more sustainable and thriving work environment for all staff members.

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