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Formal Complaint Letter #184
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You took an elderly member of your family, who was not able to walk properly, to a museum and he/she faced a few problems.

Write a letter to the manager of the museum. In your letter,

  • say why you visited the museum
  • describe the problems you faced
  • suggest what can be done to avoid those problems

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

One box per bullet, then compare with Band 9.
197 words · 3 body paragraphs
Opening

I am writing to express my concerns regarding a recent visit to your museum with an elderly family member.

Bullet 1

say why you visited the museum

We visited the museum to explore its rich history and cultural artifacts, hoping to provide a stimulating and educational experience for my elderly family member. We believed that the visit would be an enriching opportunity for both of us to learn and bond.

Bullet 2

describe the problems you faced

However, upon arrival, we encountered several problems due to the lack of accessibility for individuals with mobility issues. The museum's uneven flooring and limited seating made it challenging for my family member to navigate the exhibits comfortably. Additionally, the absence of designated rest areas posed a significant obstacle for someone who could not walk properly.

Bullet 3

suggest what can be done to avoid those problems

To avoid similar issues in the future, I suggest implementing designated accessible pathways throughout the museum, installing more seating options at regular intervals, and creating designated rest areas equipped with benches or chairs. Moreover, providing wheelchairs or mobility aids on-site could greatly enhance the overall experience for visitors with mobility limitations.

Closing

I hope that these suggestions will be taken into consideration to ensure that all visitors, regardless of their physical abilities, can fully enjoy and benefit from the museum's offerings.

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