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Formal Application Letter #185
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You would like a job working in the summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people.

Write a letter to the organisers of the summer camp. In your letter,

  • explain what sort of work you would like to do
  • describe your personality
  • say what relevant experience and skills you have

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

One box per bullet, then compare with Band 9.
253 words · 3 body paragraphs
Opening

I am writing to express my interest in working at your summer camp that focuses on sports and outdoor activities for children and young people.

Bullet 1

explain what sort of work you would like to do

I am enthusiastic about the opportunity to work as a sports instructor at the summer camp. I have a passion for sports and outdoor activities, and I believe that I can motivate and engage the campers in various sports such as soccer, basketball, and hiking. My goal is to create a fun and safe environment where children can learn new skills and develop a love for physical activities.

Bullet 2

describe your personality

My personality is best described as energetic, patient, and approachable. I have a natural ability to connect with children and young people, which allows me to build positive relationships with them. I am also organized and responsible, ensuring that all activities run smoothly and efficiently. Moreover, I am a team player who can collaborate effectively with other staff members to deliver a memorable experience for the campers.

Bullet 3

say what relevant experience and skills you have

I have relevant experience working as a sports coach for a local youth team, where I honed my leadership and communication skills. Additionally, I am certified in First Aid and CPR, providing me with the necessary skills to handle any emergencies that may arise during the camp. My experience and skills make me well-equipped to contribute to the success of your summer camp.

Closing

I am excited about the opportunity to be a part of your summer camp team and contribute to creating unforgettable experiences for the campers. Thank you for considering my application.

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