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Formal Application Letter #224
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You want to apply to a private college seeking admission for a bachelor degree. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment and cannot get admitted to the college without some help.

Write a letter to the Principal of the college:

  • Explain your current financial situation
  • Ask for information on scholarships
  • Inquire about other means of financial help available

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

One box per bullet, then compare with Band 9.
208 words · 3 body paragraphs
Opening

I am writing to express my interest in applying for a bachelor's degree at your esteemed college while also seeking assistance due to my current financial constraints.

Bullet 1

Explain your current financial situation

Unfortunately, my family is currently facing financial difficulties, and we are unable to afford the tuition fees required for admission to your college. Despite my strong desire to pursue higher education at your institution, the financial burden is a significant obstacle that I am struggling to overcome.

Bullet 2

Ask for information on scholarships

I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide me with information regarding any scholarships or financial aid opportunities that are available for prospective students in need. Understanding the scholarship options would greatly assist me in planning my finances and determining the feasibility of pursuing my studies at your college.

Bullet 3

Inquire about other means of financial help available

Moreover, I am keen to inquire about any other means of financial assistance or support that your college may offer to students facing financial challenges. Whether through work-study programs, part-time job opportunities, or installment payment plans, any assistance would make a substantial difference in my ability to enroll and succeed in my academic endeavors.

Closing

I am hopeful that with your guidance and support, I can overcome these financial obstacles and fulfill my aspiration of studying at your college. Thank you for considering my request.

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