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Formal Request Letter #267
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You want to start your own small business. Write a letter to a bank requesting information about obtaining a business loan to finance your new company.

In your letter, include the following information:

  • what kind of business you want to start
  • how much money you need
  • the length of time over which you would expect to repay the money

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

One box per bullet, then compare with Band 9.
171 words · 3 body paragraphs
Opening

I am writing to inquire about obtaining a business loan to finance my new venture.

Bullet 1

what kind of business you want to start

I am planning to start a small organic skincare company that focuses on creating natural and eco-friendly products. The business will aim to promote sustainability and ethical practices within the beauty industry.

Bullet 2

how much money you need

I estimate that I will need a loan of approximately $50,000 to cover initial startup costs, including product development, packaging, marketing, and operational expenses for the first year. This amount will also allow for some buffer to navigate any unforeseen challenges that may arise.

Bullet 3

the length of time over which you would expect to repay the money

I propose a repayment period of 3 years, as I anticipate that the business will start generating profits by the end of the first year. This timeline will provide me with enough time to establish a solid customer base and ensure steady revenue streams to meet the repayment schedule.

Closing

I would greatly appreciate any information you can provide regarding the loan application process and the terms and conditions associated with business loans. Thank you for your time and consideration.

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