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Formal Complaint Letter #58
GT Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You recently bought an item of clothing from a shop. You discovered that it had a fault and returned it to the shop for replacement or refund. However, the assistant told you that this was against the store's policy.

Write a letter to the store manager:

  • Explain the problem with the item of clothing
  • Describe the interaction with the shop assistant and the store policy issue
  • Ask for a refund or exchange on the item

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses at the top of your letter.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ……………,

One box per bullet, then compare with Band 9.
205 words · 3 body paragraphs
Salutation

Dear Store Manager,

Bullet 1

Explain the problem with the item of clothing

I hope this letter finds you well. I recently purchased a lovely blouse from your store, but unfortunately, upon closer inspection at home, I noticed a significant fault in the stitching along the hem. This fault was not visible at the time of purchase, and I was disappointed to discover it upon reaching home.

Bullet 2

Describe the interaction with the shop assistant and the store policy issue

When I returned to the store to request a replacement or refund, the assistant informed me that it was against the store's policy to offer refunds or exchanges for items once they have left the premises. I explained the situation and even showed the assistant the fault in the blouse, but they remained firm in their stance, citing the policy as the reason for their inability to assist me.

Bullet 3

Ask for a refund or exchange on the item

I kindly request your intervention in this matter and ask for your reconsideration of the store's policy in light of the circumstances. I believe that as a customer who received a defective product unknowingly, I should be entitled to either a refund or an exchange for a fault-free item of the same value.

Closing

I trust that you will address this issue promptly and amicably. I look forward to your favorable response. Thank you for your attention to this matter.

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